Post Production 1 "Adding Scenes"

Focus on Editing

Mrs. Gartland P.3

After our peer review we decided to add a little more scenes and camera angles to our film. For example, many of the shots we took were not understandable and wouldn't fully make the viewer understand the concept of the movie. We also need to work on the story and make it more sensible and take out scenes that are not really needed to understand the story. An example of this is the school scene at the beginning of the film which could be taken out without it really changing the story. Also, we need to research more on the drugs the character is taking because we need to also show that he was already under the influence before running and shoving them down his throat. By this I mean that perhaps we can imply that he is already under the influence but showing him taking some before he gets home. Another thing we could fix are the camera angle, making them fixate on the setting more and making the character show more emotion maybe. We also need to fic the angle on the mother fading into the woods and maybe make it blurry or uncolored.