AICE Media Studies AS- Patarini, L.

Focus on Editing Mrs. Gartland P.3 After our peer review we decided to add a little more scenes and camera angles to our film. For example, many of the shots we took were not understandable and wouldn't fully make the viewer understand the concept of the movie. We also need to work on the story and make it more sensible and take out scenes that are not really needed to understand the story. An example of this is the school scene at the beginning of the film which could be taken out without it really changing the story. Also, we need to research more on the drugs the character is taking because we need to also show that he was already under the influence before running and shoving them down his throat. By this I mean that perhaps we can imply that he is already under the influence but showing him taking some before he gets home. Another thing we could fix are the camera angle, making them fixate on the setting more and making the character show more emotion maybe. We also need t...

  Peer Review Luca Patarini P.3 This week we presented our 2-minute film to the class, we watched our short film and then the class presented their views on the movie. First off we have to improve the lighting and work on making the story make a little more sense to what the subject is, later we need to work on the picture frame in our film where it shows a young woman but she is way to young to be the actual mother. With the frame we also need to put up a little memorial to kind of explain that she has passed on. Another mistake, I believe was big, was the fact that we rushed the effect on the pills and did not think of the fact that they take a while to have an effect. Another subject we could change is to add a main villain where he hurts the mother or Zach. We could also work on adding dizzy shots to implement that Zach is under the influence, and we need to improve our transitions to make them smoother. On the walk home from the school we could shorten it to not lose the con...